Jasmine Hart

Woah, I'm so glad duskglimmer feels like that, I do too, and I thought I was weird! I basically write because I get anxious and depressed and edgy and cranky ...

I'm not sure I have 5 books I didn't like. Usually I'll stop after a chapter and forget about it if I don't like something.I'll give this a shot no ...

I'm sorry, but this isn't your best. The second line needs to be longer, maybe "That's what they say, but I know that it's wrong." The second stanza was a ...

In its own right, I don't think there's anything seriously wrong with this. I think the theme was simple, and you wrote in accordance with that. Yes, it really isn't ...

I love this. I think it's my favourite that I've read by you. The first stanza was perfect. I think I'd omit "an" in the first line of the second ...

I think the second last line of the last stanza is too long. I'd change it to "an end", and then if you wanted, you could rhyme it with "pretend." ...

I love it! I'm not sure about the use of the word "folks". I think I'd say "people" instead, though to be honest I don't really have a reason. I ...

This was a little too happy for my liking, but of course it's not the poem's fault that I'm a cyncic, so I'll try really hard to be constructive! Firstly, ...

It is beautiful, but I think that you over-used your adjectives.

I'm not sure that this is finished. The description was vivid, but I don't think there was any sense of closure. I think that you need to develop your theme ...

I loved it. It was so vivid, and the twist at the end was perfect. I think the punctuation was a little too scarce. I'd definetely add some commas, for ...

Hey. It's kinda hard to recommend books if I don't know what you're into, but here's a few of my favourites, and hopefully you'll like a couple: 1) Any of ...

I love her! She's my favourite poet, hands down. I love "Mirror", "Cut", "Poppies In July", and "Black Rook In Rainy Weather." (and pretty much everything else she's ever written, ...

Jasmine walks in, shaking her head as she has just gotten caught in the rain (again) and of course didn't think to bring an umbrella, as that would be too ...

Sorry, I'm not sure how you delete a post! First off, don't be too hard on yourself about this. It was your first poem, and not all that bad an ...